8 XXX : doujinshi

Great effort. If you are open for criticism, the green text was impossible for me to read.
Is this missing a page? Cause it feels like it just skipped to the end there
Nice effort, but in my opinion the text should've been color coded in coloured doujinshi. Just a hint, so its easier to see which dialogue is him/her.
We shall watch your typeset career with great interest.
Early on when you wrote "problem" it was missing the "e". Doesn't really matter, but if you're looking for stuff like this to clean up, thought I'd mention it. Besides that this was pretty good, thanks ?
Bless you for your effort.
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