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Could probably do without the siren, it doesn't really fit the scene too well and detracts a little from enjoyment (Due to how harsh and repetitive it is) And the "Skrrrk" sound after each squelch is also a little harsh, a deeper "Swallowing" sound might fit better. Not trying to shit on it or anything; super hot. Just want to provide some positive criticism.
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The sounds in general all distract from the actual subject, I'd say they just need to be toned down a bit. The alarm in particular might be more beneficial if you changed to a different tone and made it much quieter, like it were in the background, that made me think of the Metroid escape missions with the current volume and tone. Good luck with your future sound balancing though, keep experimenting!

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