8 XXX : guro

Not bad, I like the facial expressions, but there are two major issues: 1. that knife goes through her neck *extremely* fast and easily. It's clear she has no spine. 2. There's not enough blood. The neck especially would bleed a lot.
Awesome! It’s been a while!
Great for a first attempt, but there are a few things that I think you need to work on. First of all, as soon as that knife hits the carotid artery it should be an absolute fountain of blood. Second, the knife should hit heavy resistance in the spinal area. Lastly, the head goes expressionless way to quickly. When severed, the body would spasm and the head would remain responsive for anywhere up to 30 seconds. I think that it would be great if there were more blood, if the machete didn’t chop through the neck like a hot knife through butter, and if the victim were more responsive (Screaming in pain, grimacing, body spasming, and continued facial expressions after severance)
More of these please