8 XXX : yiffcomics

Pretty good. I liked it
It was very good, my only compliant is on this page https://i.imgur.com/zNjoof4.jpg it's hard to notice you need to read the bottom left before the center.
Good, you have potential, i liked it. Keep going!
Classic setup, good execution. I would agree with the criticism that the panel about the favor is let tricky to follow but its a nice first effort. Take some gold!
hot
Very nice.
My only criticism is that the font size in the text bubbles was a little bit small for my liking, but other than that, I really liked it!
Well done!
Keep up the good work. Most of the text was fine and flow was fairly consistent throughout. Just keep working on the characters, some poses looked really rough in comparison; and keep improving. Was good, would read again.
Epic
My god, hoooot.
that was pretty good, maybe spend a little more time with transition pages, but its a great start out