8 XXX : ArtGW

Congrats on the confindance to put out there for possible criticism. first pic, ok second much better, (lights are better) Third ok Might try a bit more shadow. I think it would enhance your skin better.
Looks good, I would definitely crop out the door knobs in picture 1 and 3. I like the poses, especially in the first 2 pictures. Other than that, the other suggestion to play with shadows is always fun. Keep up the good work
I like how the first two have this total documentarian feeling. (Maybe from the flash?) For me it adds a really interesting mix of authenticity/intimacy and emotional distance (like there's a clear subject/object delineation and some element of public display).